Kaolin's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unfounded Revenge]

Amazing sketches

Good art work, but overall, it didn't quite work for me.
Though there were brief flashes of brilliance in the animation here and there, but overall it was rather inconsistent.
Either its me, but I couldn't quite follow the story line coherently. Though it wasn't like totally messed up.
Its not bad but I think it could do with a little more work.

[1 - The Story of Khale]

Really fun to watch

Again this was really fun to watch. There were times where I thought the movie was diverging to being bland, but its just the small things that you put in it that really makes this flash stand out.
For example, the parts where Khale was running across the whole landscape would seem rather dull at first, but the other small bits of animation you put in it really made this movie more enjoyable to watch :P

[2 - The Story of Khale]

IMPRESSIVE!!

A brilliant job with the animations!!
Everything was so damn smooth lol.
Especially commend you on the drawings and despite there being little narrative, the overall storyline was presented without fail!!!

10/10 from me.
Keep up the good work ^^